LD2410s Radar Sensor by NovakIrs #4798
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WalkthroughThis pull request adds documentation for the new LD2410s sensor. It introduces an entry in the main documentation index under the "Motion" and "Presence Detection" sections and provides a separate, comprehensive file detailing configuration options, parameters, and examples specific to the LD2410s sensor integration. Changes
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489-494: New LD2410s Component Entry in Motion Section is Correctly FormattedThe new entry
LD2410s, components/sensor/ld2410s, ld2410s.png, Motion & Presenceis correctly added in the Motion section with the expected syntax and information. Please verify that the image file exists under
components/sensor/and that the component’s capabilities are clearly conveyed by the title.components/sensor/ld2410s.rst (3)
16-20: Address Minor Grammar and Typographical Errors in the IntroductionThere are a few typos and grammatical issues in the introduction text:
- Change “doesn't always produces” to “doesn't always produce”.
- Change “manualy calibrate values Threshold, Hold and SNR” to “manually calibrate the Threshold, Hold, and SNR values”.
- Change “energy vaules reading” to “energy values reading”.
A possible diff is:
-Module provides auto-calibration which doesn't always produces perfect results. +Module provides auto-calibration which doesn't always produce perfect results. -You can use Factory Reset to load default calibration, or manualy calibrate values Threshold, Hold and SNR for each one of 16 gates. +You can use Factory Reset to load default calibration, or manually calibrate the Threshold, Hold, and SNR values for each of the 16 gates. -You can enable energy vaules reading for gates by disabling Minimal output. +You can enable energy values reading for gates by disabling Minimal output.
155-170: Improve Clarity in Text Sensor DescriptionsThe text sensor section uses “Usefull” instead of “Useful”. It is recommended to correct this typo in all occurrences to maintain consistency and clarity. For example:
- Usefull for diagnostic and fine tuning. + Useful for diagnostic and fine tuning.
296-302: Review the Description for the Select Option “response_speed”The configuration variable for response_speed currently has the description “Detected target distance,” which appears to be a copy‐paste error. Please update the description to accurately reflect the purpose of the setting (for example, “Configures the response speed of the sensor” or similar).
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- - **response_speed** (*Optional*): - Detected target distance. - All options from :ref:`Select <config-select>`. + - **response_speed** (*Optional*): + Configures the sensor's response speed. + All options from :ref:`Select <config-select>`.
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592-604: New LD2410s Component Entry in Presence Detection Section is ConsistentThe entry
LD2410s, components/sensor/ld2410s, ld2410s.pngappears in the Presence Detection section and is consistent with the Motion section entry. Confirm that the listing meets the overall documentation style guidelines and that the entry appropriately directs users to the detailed documentation file.
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304-447: Overall Documentation Structure is ComprehensiveThe example configuration and subsequent sections (Button, Example configuration, See Also) are thorough and well-organized. The YAML examples are clear, and the configuration variables are well explained. No major issues were found in these sections.
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16-18: Clarify Calibration LanguageThe sentence "or manually calibrate values Threshold, Hold and SNR for each one of 16 gates" could be rephrased for clarity. Consider changing it to "or manually calibrate the Threshold, Hold, and SNR values for each of the 16 gates."
19-19: Clarify the “Minimal output” TerminologyThe line "You can enable energy values reading for gates by disabling Minimal output." may be ambiguous. It would help to briefly clarify what “Minimal output” means in this context (e.g., link to the button configuration or note its effect on energy value updates).
46-54: YAML Snippet Indentation ImprovementThe YAML snippet under the "Component" section:
ld2410s: uart_id: uart_busappears to have both lines at the same indentation level. For clarity and to better represent the hierarchy, consider indenting the
uart_idunderld2410s:as follows:- ld2410s: - uart_id: uart_bus + ld2410s: + uart_id: uart_busThis change will clearly indicate that
uart_idbelongs to theld2410sconfiguration.
131-174: Typographical Correction in Text Sensor SectionThere is a typographical error on line 172: "Updates only if Mininal Updades is disabled." It should be corrected to "Updates only if Minimal Updates is disabled."
Example correction:
- Updates only if Mininal Updades is disabled. + Updates only if Minimal Updates is disabled.
285-304: Remove Duplicate ‘response_speed’ Entry in Select SectionThere appears to be a duplicated bullet for response_speed at lines 299-301. Consolidate these entries into a single bullet that includes both the configuration description and its options.
For example:
- **response_speed** (*Optional*): - **response_speed** (*Optional*): - Configures the sensor's response speed. - All options from :ref:`Select <config-select>`. + **response_speed** (*Optional*): Configures the sensor's response speed. All options from :ref:`Select <config-select>`.
364-366: Ensure Consistent YAML Indentation in the Example ConfigurationIn the complete example configuration, the ld2410s snippet:
ld2410s: uart_id: uart_buswould be clearer if the indentation reflects the hierarchy. Consider updating it as follows:
- ld2410s: - uart_id: uart_bus + ld2410s: + uart_id: uart_busThis small improvement will enhance readability and reduce potential configuration misunderstandings.
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1-3: Title Formatting is ClearThe title "LD2410s Sensor" and its underline are properly formatted according to reStructuredText conventions.
4-7: SEO and Metadata Section Looks GoodThe SEO directive and image reference are clearly specified. This will help with search engine indexing and proper visual representation.
22-44: Module Pinouts Table is Well-StructuredThe list-table detailing module pinouts is clear and informative. No changes required here.
62-77: UART Configuration Section is ConsistentThe UART configuration code block and its explanation are clear and consistent with expected YAML formatting. No issues found here.
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Related issue (if applicable): fixes esphome/feature-requests#2872
Pull request in esphome with YAML changes (if applicable): esphome/esphome#8486
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nextbecause this is new documentation that has a matching pull-request in esphome as linked above.or
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currentbecause this is a fix, change and/or adjustment in the current documentation and is not for a new component or feature.Link added in
/components/index.rstwhen creating new documents for new components or cookbook.