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托福写作/2017后托福写作独立题目.doc

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+http://a4esl.org/q/h/grammar.html 练习语法的网站
+https://www.ldoceonline.com/dictionary/sanitation 朗文词典
+我的模板, grammarly 99 分
+托福写作模板,结合了一部分Official guidance:
+The reading material explores ____________________________________________
+ The listening material deals with the same issue.
+ However, the lecturer disputes the claims in the article and gives several reasons to support her idea. 
+His position is that ____________xxx总论点__________
+First of all, even though the reading material argues that ________(第一个分论点,后面有支持的也可以转述一个),______________, 
+the professor posits that______________________. He claims that ______________________. 
+Additionally, he points out that ______________________
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+Secondly, the author suggests that ______________________. 
+In the article, it is said that _____.  The lecturer, however, asserts that ______.
+ He/She goes on to say that ____________________________________________.
+ In other words, _______尽量转述,没有就算了_______________
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+Finally, the professor asserts that ______________________whereas the reading passage believes that______________________. 
+The professor proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that______________________. 
+He notes that _____.That is to say, ______________________. 
+Thus, the reading material's argument is not logical.(先写完听力所有的东西,把关键词写出来最重要, 时间够就再写点套话.)
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+OG的模板https://www.toeflresources.com/writing-section/integrated-writing/ 
+The reading and the lecture are both about _____. 
+The author of the article feels that ______.  or: The author of the reading presents three theories about _____.
+The lecturer disputes the claims made in the article.
+His position is that _____.
+Use the following templates for the body paragraphs:
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+According to the reading  _____.
+The article mentions that ____.
+This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer.
+He claims that ____.
+Additionally, he points out that ______.
+–
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+Secondly, the author suggests ______.
+In the article, it is said that _____.
+The lecturer, however, asserts that ______.
+He goes on to say that ______.
+–
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+Finally, the author posits that _____.
+The author contends that ____.
+In contrast, the lecturer’s stance is  _____.
+He notes that _____.
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+The reading passage explores the issue of (名词, 名词短语或者how/what/whether/why引导的从句).
+The professor's lecture deals with the same issue.
+ However, she thinks that   xxx总论点(he thinks that these ways are impractical and unrealistic) ,which contradicts what the reading thinks.
+ And in the lecture, she gives several specific reasons to support her opinion/idea.
+First, even though the reading passage suggests that (第一个分论点,后面有支持的也可以转述一个),
+the professor argues in the lecture that (第一个反驳). This is because ()   ,which means (最好深入写一下, 如果没听出来, 那就转述一下)
+Obviously, the professor's argument disproves its counterpart in the reading.//这个凑字数
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+Moreover, contrary to the statement in the reading that (第2个分论点,后面有支持的也可以转述一个), the professor contends that  (第2个反驳). 
+Then he/she supports this point with the fact that (第2个支持论据)  In other words, (继续转述) 
+Finally, the professor asserts that   (第3个反驳) whereas the author of the reading claims that (第3个分论点). 
+The professor proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that (第3个支持论据) That is to say(implying that xxxx),(继续转述,没时间或者转述不出来也没事) 
+Thus, the reading material's statements are not logical.
+
+留几分钟检查最好, 匆匆忙忙很容易拼写错误.
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+可以替换: 
+gives considerable proof that
+shows  that
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+may 后面不用三单.
+cause damge to ...
+harmful to their bodies.
+unconvincing.
+ the events that happened around them   定语从句做主语一定要that, 被动可以不用.
+我默写了一遍在下面.
+The reading passage explores the issue of xxxx .
+However, the professor gives several reasons to contradict what the reading thinks.
+First of all, contrary to the statement in the reading material that xxx,  the professor contends that xxxxx. Then  he supports this point with the fact that 
+In other words ,xxxx 
+Secondly, even though the reading passage suggests that xxxx,  the professor argues in the lecture that xxxx   This is because xxx, which means xxx
+Obviously, the professor's argument disproves its counterpart in the reading material.
+Finally, the professor asserts that xxxx  whereas the author of the reading passage claims that xxxx 
+The professor proves that this claim is indefensible by pointing out that xxxxxx That is to say, xxxx implying that xxxx .
+Thus the reading material's statement are not logical.
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+

托福阅读/2018summer.doc 托福写作/2018summer.doc

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+介绍背景:   it is widely accepted that ....      At present, /Currently,/ In this day and age/
+认可:    xxx plays an increasely significant role in xxx 
+The progress in xxx has enabled us to xxxx
+担忧
+The issue of xxxx is increasingly severe/ worrying .
+引出讨论
+People remain divided over whether xxx
+A比B更重要：　
+And contrary to what many people believe, xxxx(因素A) is actually more important to achieving job satisfaction than enjoyment at work(因素B).
+
+段落 段内并列:  xxx have numerous benefits. For one thing, xxxx Also, xxxx.  Finally, xxx
+段内递进 :  First, xxxx , For example,  xxxx   specifically  具体来说 xxxx. Moreover,       .   Worse yet(更糟糕的是), xxx 
+段内因果 .    Therefore     Thus 
+段内对比  In contrast,  现在如何如何,        
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+Further, 
+also,
+In the past, public transportation is an important part of economic development.
+ 短句过多 (7) 一句话不少于7个词.
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+""  引号前面不用逗号