Update telemetry docs based on vscode-codeql telemetry changes (#53475)

Author: koesie10

content/code-security/codeql-for-vs-code/using-the-advanced-functionality-of-the-codeql-for-vs-code-extension/telemetry-in-codeql-for-visual-studio-code.md

@@ -11,23 +11,23 @@ topics:
   - CodeQL
 type: reference
 allowTitleToDifferFromFilename: true
-intro: 'If you specifically opt in to permit {% data variables.product.company_short %} to do so, {% data variables.product.company_short %} will collect usage data and metrics for the purposes of helping the core developers to improve the {% data variables.product.prodname_codeql %} extension for {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode_shortname %}.'
+intro: 'If {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode_shortname %} telemetry is enabled, {% data variables.product.company_short %} will collect usage data and metrics for the purposes of helping the core developers to improve the {% data variables.product.prodname_codeql %} extension for {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode_shortname %}.'
 redirect_from:
   - /code-security/codeql-for-vs-code/about-telemetry-in-codeql-for-visual-studio-code
 ---
 
 This data will not be shared with any parties outside of {% data variables.product.company_short %}. IP addresses and installation IDs will be retained for a maximum of 30 days. Anonymous data will be retained for a maximum of 180 days.
 
 > [!NOTE]
-> Telemetry collection is disabled by default in {% data variables.product.prodname_codeql %} for {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode %}. When telemetry collection is disabled, no data will be sent to {% data variables.product.company_short %} servers.
+> Telemetry collection in {% data variables.product.prodname_codeql %} for {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode %} follows the {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode_shortname %} telemetry settings. When telemetry collection is disabled, no data will be sent to {% data variables.product.company_short %} servers.
 
 ## Why we collect data
 
 {% data variables.product.company_short %} collects aggregated, anonymous usage data and metrics to help us improve {% data variables.product.prodname_codeql %} for {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode_shortname %}. IP addresses and installation IDs are collected only to ensure that anonymous data is not duplicated during aggregation.
 
 ## What data is collected
 
-If you opt in, {% data variables.product.company_short %} collects the following information related to the usage of the extension. The data collected are:
+If telemetry is enabled, {% data variables.product.company_short %} collects the following information related to the usage of the extension. The data collected are:
 
 * The identifiers of any {% data variables.product.prodname_codeql %}-related {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode_shortname %} commands that are run. For each command, these are: the timestamp, time taken, and whether or not the command completed successfully.
 
@@ -69,9 +69,7 @@ We only collect the minimal amount of data we need to answer the questions about
 
 ## Disabling telemetry reporting
 
-You can disable telemetry collection by setting `codeQL.telemetry.enableTelemetry` to `false` in your settings. For more information, see [AUTOTITLE](/code-security/codeql-for-vs-code/using-the-advanced-functionality-of-the-codeql-for-vs-code-extension/customizing-settings).
-
-Additionally, telemetry collection will be disabled if the global `telemetry.telemetryLevel` setting is set to `off`. For more information about global telemetry collection, see [Visual Studio Code FAQ](https://code.visualstudio.com/docs/supporting/faq#_how-to-disable-telemetry-reporting) in the {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode %} documentation.
+You can disable telemetry collection by setting the global `telemetry.telemetryLevel` setting to `off`. For more information, see the [Visual Studio Code Telemetry page](https://code.visualstudio.com/docs/getstarted/telemetry) in the {% data variables.product.prodname_vscode %} documentation.
 
 ## Further reading